"Unfortunately it has been decided that yours [proposal] is not what we are looking for at this time.
Yours is one of those easy reading and flowing stories that publishers are looking for. But there are some craft issues that should be addressed.
[He lists three areas.]
Consider overhauling the story development and try again. You have a great writing voice. If you don't know where to turn you might want to hire an outside editor like Susan May Warren."
One of the issues he lists I've already been working on with - wait for it - Susan May Warren! How cool is that! I am so excited about being rejected right now. I am also extremely grateful we have off from school this week. I had planned on working on some other areas of writing, but they will have to wait now. I don't want to rush through this, but I believe I could finish it in two weeks. So away I go! If you don't hear from me any time soon, just check to make sure I've done more than drink coffee.